His Melody

His Melody by Amarie Avant
Publication Date: April 28, 2016
Genres: Adult, Contemporary, Romance

My Review:

OK this is a hard one for me to review. I liked the IDEA of this story. 

Melody is the main protagonista, yet there is a secondary one Angelique. Then we have the main protagonist Kiel (Pronounced Kyle), and the secondary Franco..... 2 completely different stories that over lay somewhat (girls are friends) but like 2 books in one for the most part. Unfortunately I didnt feel anything for any of the characters. They were all flat to me. There are big chunks missing, or out of place. I am wondering if a GOOD proofreader would have done a BIG amount of good for this book.

Kiel is a little TOO obsessively in love with his wife. Melody is overly self centered, and just a strange character. I THINK she is supposed to be this way due to her family, but it just didnt work for me. And she is married to Kiel yet when she has what should have been a really emotional moment for them, she doesnt even tell him! 

I DO like that the author gives Melody "issues" that many people face, although I dont think its usually all wrapped up together. And it all fell flat. No real emotional feel. Even the relationships felt forced. I would love to give this author a try some time in the future, but this book really just fell short for me.

Purchase: Amazon

Before I laid eyes on him, I fell, which says a lot since my heart wasn’t built to fall in love… Five years ago, Melody Bradford fell in love with and married songwriter, Kiel McIsaac. He transformed her sorrows into love songs and became everything her heart craves. Kiel was the only one that has ever been able to break down her walls enough to see the girl underneath the shell. But Melody is damaged deeper than Kiel knows, with a pain that runs far back into her past and creeps out in her present. Deciding that Kiel deserves better, Melody makes the hard choice to rip her own heart out and let him go. Yet Kiel won’t go quietly… not when his own heart is living inside every breath his wife takes. He loves her completely, for all her flaws,imperfections and resistance – she is everything he needs, and the only one he sings about. Yet Melody has secrets buried dark and deep in her soul, secrets that could finally push him away and destroy everything they have built.

 About Amarie Avant

Mother of two. Wife of one alpha. And alpha to his alpha. Lover of thrills and enticingly sexy chills.

Azusa Pacific University alumni where God comes first. This dyslexic and highly attention deficit author has received two Bachelors and a Masters in Counseling. Though sociopaths are very interesting, and coupon shopping is just as thrilling as action or cartoon movies, Amarie Avant has taken on romance. Beware anytime you open an Amarie Avant novel: This is not your ordinary love story…

Catch up on Amarie’s debut series FEAR (also an Amazon best seller) while you wait.

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